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We had such an amazing time on our sunset charter in Charleston! There were 11 of us in our group, and the boat was incredibly spacious, we could easily see it being comfortable for a full group of 24.

Captain Gene was fantastic! He was super friendly, knowledgeable, and shared so much interesting information about Charleston and the surrounding area. He made the whole experience feel relaxed and fun. And the sunset playlist was perfect we enjoyed the music, the views, and the whole vibe from start to finish.

Beautiful sunset, great boat, great music, and an awesome captain. We couldn’t have asked for a better way to spend the evening in Charleston. Highly recommend!

All 11 of us had a grest day on the water with Eugene!  He took us to a restaurant and we had a few frozen drinks and went swimming at a sandbar. Captain Gene is the best.